Silver Shimmers
Silver shimmers on the water,
Heavenly fans of light shine down
From the evening sun, well hidden
Under black clouds, a mourning gown
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There’s real promise in that vision
Of a beautiful time to come
All worries will evaporate
Like those clouds, they’ll all be gone.
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Carole Parkes (Copyright June 2014)
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You are truly a sweetie
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Thank you. You’ve made my day, but I’m not sure what I’ve done to deserve such a lovely comment.
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From what I have read, you are a genuinely positive person and I enjoy reading your poetry. If I were to describe what I have read it would be “sweet and uplifting”
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Thank you so much. I’m delighted you enjoyed them.
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This is a beautiful poem, Carole.
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Thank you Cynthia. I’m so pleased you like it. I know none of the poetry rules, just write what comes into my head, so I don’t really feel confident with poetry. I’m not scared of showing myself up though so it doesn’t really matter if I fail
I love reading about life on your verandah. Keep up the good work.
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I am not a real poet either, but yours reads more like what I think poetry should be! There’s a fluidity there.
Thanks for liking my posts. I appreciate it.
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Sweet comment, thanks.
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Lovely poem!
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Thank you. I don’t really feel I can write good poetry, but what the heck. If you don’t try how are you going to learn? Ha ha.
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You write very good poetry! It made me feel a lot!
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Thank you. I’m happy you feel it.
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